[NetBehaviour] A Suicide at the Picnic

Wed Feb 12 12:36:00 CET 2025

I join the other comments
would love to read the book
Annie

On Wed, Feb 12, 2025 at 12:33 PM marc.garrett via NetBehaviour <
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> Thanks, Ana,
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> It feels somehow appropriate to share it on the list rather than on social
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> Wishing you well
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> Marc
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> On Wednesday, 12 February 2025 at 04:49, Ana Valdés via NetBehaviour <
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> Looking forward to read the book excellent start!
> Ana
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> ons 12 feb. 2025 kl. 00:49 skrev Alan Sondheim via NetBehaviour <
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>> agree, incredibly powerful, I wonder if this is truth, fiction, mixed, it
>> makes a difference in the reading, amazing writing -
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>> On Tue, Feb 11, 2025 at 8:08 PM giselle beiguelman via NetBehaviour <
>> netbehaviour at lists.netbehaviour.org> wrote:
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>>> What a powerful text! I can’t wait for the book.
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>>> GB
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>>> Em ter., 11 de fev. de 2025 às 20:40, marc.garrett via NetBehaviour <
>>> netbehaviour at lists.netbehaviour.org> escreveu:
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>>>> *A Suicide at the Picnic*
>>>>
>>>> Before Ken became my stepdad, my mother, my brother Nigel, and I would
>>>> often walk past the local garage where he worked as a mechanic. We would
>>>> stop and chat with him, exchanging pleasantries. At the time, I wasn't
>>>> entirely sure how long it took for him to step into the role of our father
>>>> after Barry, our biological dad, was sent to prison. Barry's absence didn't
>>>> leave a void for us—we didn't miss him. However, we did deeply mourn the
>>>> loss of our sister, Donna, who had been taken away by social services
>>>> around the same time. That was the real heartbreak.
>>>>
>>>> When Mum started seeing Ken, life seemed to have a brighter hue.
>>>> Everything felt rosy, and we genuinely enjoyed each other's company.
>>>> Although they weren't married yet, Ken naturally assumed the role of our
>>>> new dad. It was an exciting time for us, and we still lived in our modest
>>>> ground-floor flat on Windermere Road.
>>>>
>>>> One morning, Ken pulled up outside the flat in a Bentley T1, a sleek
>>>> and impressive car. He casually mentioned that it was the same model the
>>>> Duke of Devonshire owned. I had no idea who that was then, but the name
>>>> made it sound grand. The car's boot was packed with a picnic hamper
>>>> brimming with delicious food: fresh rolls, butter, ham, cheese, tomatoes,
>>>> cucumber, boiled eggs, pickles, and more. Alongside it was a large
>>>> crocheted blanket, one of Mum's favourites. It had a zigzag pattern, which
>>>> I always thought was beautiful.
>>>>
>>>> As soon as we climbed inside, I noticed how pristine the Bentley
>>>> smelled, a mix of freshness and a distinct scent that I later assumed was
>>>> leather. I wasn't sure if the seats were made of leather, but they
>>>> certainly had a strong, rich scent. Ken explained that he had borrowed the
>>>> car from a friend named Tommy, who was passionate about collecting cars.
>>>> This particular loan was a gesture of appreciation for some repair work Ken
>>>> had done for him. Tommy had many vehicles; I vividly remember him visiting
>>>> us once in a striking yellow Lotus Elan. That car had an 8-track tape
>>>> player, an obsolete format, but at the time, it played the smooth, soulful
>>>> grooves of the late '60s, adding to its charm.
>>>>
>>>> This trip marked a milestone for my brother and me—our first outing
>>>> into the countryside. Ken drove for about an hour, and none of us, except
>>>> him, knew our destination. Eventually, he parked at the top of a hill, and
>>>> we climbed over a turnstile, stepping onto a vast, open meadow. In the
>>>> distance, a railway line cut through the landscape. Mum spread the large
>>>> blanket on the grass, carefully arranging the food, cutlery, and crockery.
>>>> The sun shone warmly, and a gentle breeze danced through the air. It felt
>>>> like the perfect day. I was particularly delighted because boiled egg
>>>> sandwiches were my absolute favourite.
>>>>
>>>> It was one of those rare, precious early moments with Ken. We were all
>>>> together, basking in the simplicity of a family picnic. We ate, laughed,
>>>> and enjoyed the idyllic setting, savouring our newfound happiness and
>>>> stability.
>>>>
>>>> Then, abruptly, the atmosphere shifted. A policeman emerged from
>>>> nowhere, walking shakily up the hill toward us. Ken immediately stood up
>>>> and went down to meet him. Their conversation was quiet and solemn. I could
>>>> only watch from a distance, wondering if we had unknowingly trespassed and
>>>> broken the law. But it soon became apparent that something far more grave
>>>> had occurred.
>>>>
>>>> Ken returned to us, his expression unreadable. The officer remained
>>>> partway down the hill, waiting. Ken then delivered news that changed the
>>>> day's tone entirely—a person had jumped in front of a train, and the
>>>> officer, who was on his own, needed assistance. He needed Ken's help to
>>>> retrieve the scattered remains of the body.
>>>>
>>>> Without hesitation, Mum and Ken began packing away our picnic. They
>>>> quickly stowed the half-eaten food, utensils, and dishes into the basket.
>>>> Ken tugged at the blanket, folded it neatly, and, without another word,
>>>> followed the policeman down the bottom of the hill. As they disappeared
>>>> from view, the distant sound of police sirens began filling the air, but we
>>>> could not tell what was happening.
>>>>
>>>> For the next forty-five minutes, we waited in uneasy silence. When Ken
>>>> finally returned, he looked pale, his face tinged with shades of grey and
>>>> green. He didn't say a word about what he had witnessed or done. There was
>>>> no discussion, no attempt to explain. The weight of the experience clung to
>>>> him like an invisible shroud. We gathered the rest of our things, climbed
>>>> back into the Bentley, and drove home in silence, the earlier joy of the
>>>> day wholly erased. The ride back felt infinitely more prolonged than the
>>>> drive there, and the air was thick with an unspoken heaviness that none of
>>>> us dared to break.
>>>>
>>>> A section from the book Feral Class by Marc Garrett. To be published by
>>>> Minor Compositions in 2025.
>>>>
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